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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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~I Want~
I want to stay here. I want to bask in your smile and soak up the sound of your voice. I want to freeze time. I want for this moment to never end, to always feel your heartbeat against me, to feel your arms wrapped around me. I want to feel safe. I want to laugh and tease. I want to close my eyes and feel your fingers tracing delicate patterns against my skin. I want to be free. I want to hold my head high and smile through the tears.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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The story is old
the tale is true although few believe but me and you. A forest deep a castle bright and always there the guiding light. A king, a queen, a duke, the fool, the enchantress by a moon-lit pool. A knight, a steed, a wizard's grail God save the souls should you fail. Faith and hope then pain, a cry while in the air the dragons fly. A shadow falls over the moon marching feet they're coming soon. The battle long the toll is great so waged are wars that stem from hate. But in the end truth wins the fight to carry on through one more night.
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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Wowwee I Want......... I have read this over and over, I am still trying to figure out what you are saying in the end. It seems to turn, then again, maybe not. I think I will read it somemore....
Woww!!!
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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I thank you both very much for your comments. This is the first time I've written in such a "short" fashion but it appeals to me in that most of my stuff just...comes out!
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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Kiss me softly and save my soul,
hold me tight, don't let me go. Touch my cheek and make me sigh, love me true for this won't die. Wipe a tear and ease my ache, with you I'd rather give than take; my life, my heart, my trust, my all, yet still I know my dream will fall.
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COMPLETED and A TRAINER
Location: BEAN_TOWN
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Sculptured emotions given freely from within
can be taken without greed, the deep one reached the stronger they become. For when you will from the ground core of sharing with another, your true gifts will shine through. Good stuff MINX. Never give up on the journey of your inter-utopia.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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It's cold in the world
when you reach out to grasp the fleeting of what never was there. It's hard all alone as you stand in the crowd and the mask is the smile that you wear.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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She walked in darkness,
the wind as her guide. She cried in solitude, tears she can't hide. She smiled so sadly, the pain held so tight. She sighed so softly, and longed for the light. Imagine my surprise when I looked to see that this lonely lady was in fact just me.
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I change
Location: USA
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Minx, I've come to know some part of you from your journal. Now I've come to know another part via this thread. We are deep wells and multifaceted. In time and with effort we can come to know something of each other...in the mind's eye and by the mind's ear, at least. Thanks for offering these contributions from within. There is always more revealed...
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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Well the words are back....And I am awestruck once again. You seem to bring out something in me with your words, and I like it. Thanks for sharing
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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I am always overwhelmed by the support I receive here...thank you for your kind words. And yes J.R.V.A. I guess I was in a bit of a lull there but that never lasts long! Too much inside to get out!
![]() ~Reflection~ I looked at a reflection in a mirror and it was me. Yet that is not the girl I am, my true self should be free. For life is just a journey filled with laughter and with tears; good friends who stand beside you through the ever-changing years. I looked at the reflection, caught a memory of a smile it was a small reminder that you've made it all worthwhile.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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A smile can last a lifetime,
while a memory can fade. I do my best to stumble through this world that I have made. Life's a song I'll sing aloud, a dance we all can share. A precious gift to treasure because I know you care.
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Crazy
Location: Indiana University of Pennsylvania
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Minx,
Thanks for the comment you left on my post, the response I've gotten so far (even though it's small) has made my day. I really really like some of your poems you have here, this stanza: Imagine my surprise when I looked to see that this lonely lady was in fact just me. It really got to me. Maybe it's because I can see myself in your writing. Either way, your words are beautiful, and thus, so are you. |
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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Thank you ccxcone! I really do look forward to seeing a little more of your writings here as well!
![]() Once upon a memory a smile came alive, a dream that slumbered wakened and it brought along a smile. The jester tipped his hat to me, the birds sang out a tune, the flowers danced upon a breeze as sun gave way to moon.
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Ah, my dear friend...You are simply amazing! Still bearing the queen of lit title! You have some awe inspiring work here my dear. I can't wait until the writers block clears in my head so I can start contributing some more here.
Thank you for adding so much life to this forum! *hugs* ~Angel~
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TFPer formaly known as Chauncey
Location: North East
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I enjoy your writing,
There is a lot to soak in when you go through this thread. And I have fun reading it. I am glad that you have a place like this to be able to write so comfortably in.
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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I don't usually lean towards the sappy/mushy/upbeat poems but here's one that's been niggling at my brain for sometime.
I like big, stupid dogs and walks in the rain, Talking 'till dawn with nothing to gain. I like sunshine and roses, ribbons and lace, I like to meander through life at slow pace. I like picnics in meadows, the smell of fresh hay, The way the air feels after raining all day. I like laughter from children, purrs from a cat, A wink from a stranger - I like it like that. I like a good giggle, a tickle and grin, I like deep hard kisses that make my head spin. I like long, lingering looks and sleeping in late, Sipping champagne with a fire in the grate. I like dewdrops and sunsets, waves on the sand, I like summer storms and a man with strong hands. I like secrets and moonbeams, a dance in the dark, A trip to the zoo or slow walk through the park. I like watching leaves fall and kittens at play, Stealing a kiss in the midst of the day. I like singing out loud, candles and wine, Waterfalls, lightning and a love to call mine. I like secret wishes, soft sighs in the night, Dreams that are made in the fading twilight. I like walking in moonlight, laughing out loud, Sharing a joke or just watching a cloud. I like rose petals, rainbows, birds in the sky, A bright sunny day, ships sailing by. I like seashells, windmills and hidden treasure, A look in your eye that promises pleasure. I like love at first sight, a candle's soft glow, Dancing 'till sunrise, angels in snow. I like sad love songs and the cry of a loon, shooting stars, campfires, a big Harvest moon. I like fairie tales, surprises, hearts that are true, presents with bows, flowers covered in dew. I like country roads, waterfalls and wishing wells, snowflakes, sand castles and fragrant bluebells. I like big, stupid dogs and hearts that are true, I'd like to take my love and share it with you.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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You are...
My light when the day fades. My smile when the tears fall. My hope when the faith fails. My soul when it's lost. My air when I'm winded. My star when I wish. My candle when dark comes. My heart when it's missed. My life when I'm breathing. My love when you're close.
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Wonderful, simply wonderful work my dear!
I will say to you what I have said to J.R.V.A. time and time again... Get a book started if you haven't already! I've been suffering severely from writer's block! I have a poem that I have almost done and many, many one, two and three liners. But nothing to post! AHHHHHHHH! Keep up the good work! ![]() *hugs*
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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It's been a while so here's more "release"
![]() Hope you like.... Gagged and tied yet left for dead; wicked thoughts run through my head. Shamed and silenced, empty while here; private demons that know every fear. Loved and lost and cast aside; cherish the soul as it tries to hide. Cold and alone, empty and bare; if only they knew what I had to share.
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Jesus Freak
Location: Following the light...
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Such deep words in wonderful poems that bring out vivid, sad pictures... You have an amazing way with words. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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A whisper, just an echo
lost amongst the tumbled thoughts that linger in my head. A cry, heard yet unheeded, wasting away in the crevices of my soul. A memory, faded and torn struggling to survive in the darkness that is I.
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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Well Minx, I really like this. It makes me think about things, as I read it again and again. You really can bring the emotion out with your pen. Thanks
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What's beyond psycho?
Location: Still out there
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Your words touch me.
I don't know what else to say. I really don't. I don't have the words to express how your writing affects me. Thank you.
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TFPer formaly known as Chauncey
Location: North East
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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![]() And thank you everyone elce for the nice comments. I seem to have hit a bit of a block....start writing a few lines and they just don't flow. *shrug* Soon enough....
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Junkie
Location: Up yonder
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Winter Trees
Like skeletons stripped of flesh with frozen, agonized fingers they reach for the light that isn't there. Catching frozen teardrops on their outstretched hands, do they feel the cold as I?
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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You have a way, that when I read what you write.....
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