CityOfAngels

She Loved Me, Too

Not too long ago I was a nieve teenaged punk.
I was into love and happiness and all that stupid junk.
I met a girl who I thought loved me, I thought I was in luck.
Little did I know that I was just a stupid fuck.

I really really loved her and I saw it in her eyes,
that she loved me, too.
I couldn't wait to see her, as she hung out with other guys,
she must've loved me, too.

I took her to a nice hotel and paid for all her shit.
I bought her flowers, I bought her food, I just wouldn't quit.
I even bought her a PS2, I was such a stupid ditz.
I didn't know I wasn't the only one sucking on her tits.

I really really loved her and I saw it in her eyes,
that she loved me, too.
Her every word was gold to me as she only told me lies,
she must've loved me, too.

When I found out about the first guy, I blamed it on myself.
Along came the second, but I just put it on the shelf.
It took a million other guys to finally break my shell,
and I realized, this bitch oughtta go to hell!

I really really loved her, but I saw it in her eyes,
she never loved me, too.
I can't believe I didn't notice when she fucked all those guys,
she never loved me, too.

But still to this day, whenever I think of her,
tears fill my eyes and turn my vision into a blur.
I think of what we had, and to it I confer,
the honor of my love, as long as I endured.

I really really love her, and I'll always wonder why,
she never loved me, too.
I'll remember the days, when I could really smile 'cause,
I thought she loved me, too.
I thought she loved me, too.
Maybe she'll love me now.

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The words "love" and "life" go together. It is almost as if they are one. You must love to live, and you must live to love, or you have never lived nor loved at all.

CityOfAngels

Forgot to add: Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

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The words "love" and "life" go together. It is almost as if they are one. You must love to live, and you must live to love, or you have never lived nor loved at all.

itch vaccine

I have a thing against poems that cuss

but I feel your pain..

CityOfAngels

What's so bad about a poem that cusses? It's just a poem. It's not like I'm chewing you out or anything. This poem was meant to be funny, in a sad sort of way since I based it upon my own life's experiences, and I used the cuss words just to emphasize on certain things. It also helped with making it all rhyme.

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The words "love" and "life" go together. It is almost as if they are one. You must love to live, and you must live to love, or you have never lived nor loved at all.

shortynickel

thats a good poem...just hope its not true to u sir

itch vaccine

I dunno, personal preference, no hard feelings there CityOfAngels

fallen_angel

I think it was written very well and the cussing does help to give emphasis to the meaning behind the poem. I understand your pain and its good that you can use humor to make it stand out more that it was real. (just my opinion)

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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel