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I think it was written very well and the cussing does help to give emphasis to the meaning behind the poem. I understand your pain and its good that you can use humor to make it stand out more that it was real. (just my opinion)
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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