A poem - "She Loved Me, Too"
 

She Loved Me, Too

Not too long ago I was a nieve teenaged punk.
I was into love and happiness and all that stupid junk.
I met a girl who I thought loved me, I thought I was in luck.
Little did I know that I was just a stupid fuck.

I really really loved her and I saw it in her eyes,
that she loved me, too.
I couldn't wait to see her, as she hung out with other guys,
she must've loved me, too.

I took her to a nice hotel and paid for all her shit.
I bought her flowers, I bought her food, I just wouldn't quit.
I even bought her a PS2, I was such a stupid ditz.
I didn't know I wasn't the only one sucking on her tits.

I really really loved her and I saw it in her eyes,
that she loved me, too.
Her every word was gold to me as she only told me lies,
she must've loved me, too.

When I found out about the first guy, I blamed it on myself.
Along came the second, but I just put it on the shelf.
It took a million other guys to finally break my shell,
and I realized, this bitch oughtta go to hell!

I really really loved her, but I saw it in her eyes,
she never loved me, too.
I can't believe I didn't notice when she fucked all those guys,
she never loved me, too.

But still to this day, whenever I think of her,
tears fill my eyes and turn my vision into a blur.
I think of what we had, and to it I confer,
the honor of my love, as long as I endured.

I really really love her, and I'll always wonder why,
she never loved me, too.
I'll remember the days, when I could really smile 'cause,
I thought she loved me, too.
I thought she loved me, too.
Maybe she'll love me now.

Forgot to add: Any feedback is greatly appreciated! :)

I have a thing against poems that cuss :(

but I feel your pain..

What's so bad about a poem that cusses? It's just a poem. It's not like I'm chewing you out or anything. This poem was meant to be funny, in a sad sort of way since I based it upon my own life's experiences, and I used the cuss words just to emphasize on certain things. It also helped with making it all rhyme.

thats a good poem...just hope its not true to u sir

I dunno, personal preference, no hard feelings there CityOfAngels :)

I think it was written very well and the cussing does help to give emphasis to the meaning behind the poem. I understand your pain and its good that you can use humor to make it stand out more that it was real. (just my opinion)