Chimera

It might not be the same
but still it feels like home
and though you take the blame
at least I'm not alone
this place you took from my heart
a void just yesterday
allows us both to start
a brand new way to play
I just hope you stay

FuriousAvatar

Chimera

Thank you for the compliment, I sincerely appreciate the input.

Positive...or Negative.

Drider_it

A nice balance i saw there.. I'm not good at figuring out poems and such.. but this one I can relate to. Heart friend.

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It means only one thing, and everything: Cut. Once committed to fight, Cut. Everything else is secondary. Cut. That is your duty, your purpose, your hunger. There is no rule more important, no commitment that overrides that one. Cut. The lines are a portrayal of the dance. Cut from the void, not from bewilderment. Cut the enemy as quickly and directly as possible. Cut with certainty. Cut decisively, resoultely. Cut into his strength. Flow through the gaps in his guard. Cut him. Cut him down utterly. Don't allow him a breath. Crush him. Cut him without mercy to the depth of his spirit. It is the balance to life: death. It is the dance with death. It is the law a war wizard lives by, or he dies.

Meditrina

My eyes are drawn to this last line.

I do hope you stay.

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"Toughness is in the soul and spirit, not in muscles." ~Alex Karras

Chimera

Who are You...to know me well
a mind beside my own
semblance of self bleeding into another
unlike I've ever known
Carbon paper...Xerox thought
I dont know how you do it
but somehow all my inner hopes
You give as if you knew it
Do you feel...the Love I hold
In heart, as well as soul
it seems as if we two, are one
and you are in control

Chimera

This Faded Blue of Subtle tears
Hidden behind salty soaked sleeves
That you are spared my bloody heart
The Martyr you dont know
Drinking the ambrosia laced fears
Held in captive embrace by locked focus
Knowing only a memory of phantom dreams
Heavy chains upon my soul
Broken if I let you go

J.R.V.A.

I like your writings... very nice

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart