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Chimera dreams
It might not be the same
but still it feels like home and though you take the blame at least I'm not alone this place you took from my heart a void just yesterday allows us both to start a brand new way to play I just hope you stay |
Beautiful. Simple, yet elegant, with a promise of hope and new beginnings. Very well done, Chimera.
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A nice balance i saw there.. I'm not good at figuring out poems and such.. but this one I can relate to. Heart friend.
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My eyes are drawn to this last line.
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Who are You...to know me well
a mind beside my own semblance of self bleeding into another unlike I've ever known Carbon paper...Xerox thought I dont know how you do it but somehow all my inner hopes You give as if you knew it Do you feel...the Love I hold In heart, as well as soul it seems as if we two, are one and you are in control |
This Faded Blue of Subtle tears
Hidden behind salty soaked sleeves That you are spared my bloody heart The Martyr you dont know Drinking the ambrosia laced fears Held in captive embrace by locked focus Knowing only a memory of phantom dreams Heavy chains upon my soul Broken if I let you go |
I like your writings... very nice :)
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