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Tasu · 09-24-2003, 11:00 PM

I dunno what the girl's first name is... but i know the last is Shives. She's a pilot

Critique please! If anyone knows how to use color in photoshop well, please gimme some tips!

analinguist · 09-25-2003, 05:06 AM

the body seems really long (especially the neck, its like ET), the face kind of looks more manly then a girl. i thought that it was a rocker from the 80s, especially with the color palette you are choosing. i don't think that you're coloring is that bad, maybe experiment with different brushes, and not put it on a glowing orange background. also you're color palette is very pastel-ish, maybe some darker tones would help out a little bit. trying playing more with line weight, marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean.

gallopingwanker · 09-25-2003, 08:54 AM

what he said^ she reminds me of my bus driver from high school

Tasu · 09-25-2003, 08:19 PM

Ya after i got away from it, the neck is super freakin long... I totally was trying to compensate for the usual no-neck drawings that i make. I'll re-do the color and make an entire new head when i get back

marsfyre · 09-25-2003, 10:38 PM

its nto bad man ^__^ but try to give the objects around her neck more purpose(they don't look liek armor or weapons at the moment ^__^;; ) also a suggestion for how to make her look less manly would be to make the angle of her chin alot steeper ^__^ hope you can work out that little neck problem but I think the body looks fine ^__^ good luck bro!

also.. to analinguist : "marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean."
thanky ou man ^__^ and also I'm a "he" not a their lol ^_^;;

YKK · 09-27-2003, 07:12 PM

it looks really good.. one more thing about the neck nobody has yet mentioned is that it seems to bulge from the chin and base of the skull.. i like the red tint in her eyes.. good work!

Tasu · 09-28-2003, 12:19 PM

I noticed that the lines going into the head are totally fucked up, but since the head is a structural problem... crit this dummy

GoldenOuroboros · 09-28-2003, 02:29 PM

Neck looks long again.. j/k

Tasu · 09-28-2003, 07:07 PM

09-24-2003, 11:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	Game Character I dunno what the girl's first name is... but i know the last is Shives. She's a pilot Critique please! If anyone knows how to use color in photoshop well, please gimme some tips! Last edited by Tasu; 09-24-2003 at 11:08 PM..

09-25-2003, 05:06 AM	#2 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	the body seems really long (especially the neck, its like ET), the face kind of looks more manly then a girl. i thought that it was a rocker from the 80s, especially with the color palette you are choosing. i don't think that you're coloring is that bad, maybe experiment with different brushes, and not put it on a glowing orange background. also you're color palette is very pastel-ish, maybe some darker tones would help out a little bit. trying playing more with line weight, marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean. __________________ end

09-27-2003, 07:12 PM	#6 (permalink)
YKK Crazy Location: Toronto, ONT	it looks really good.. one more thing about the neck nobody has yet mentioned is that it seems to bulge from the chin and base of the skull.. i like the red tint in her eyes.. good work! __________________ We're all black sheep and we know it.. So don't fsck it up for the rest. -- Sick of It All; Yours Truly

09-28-2003, 02:29 PM	#8 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Neck looks long again.. j/k __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

09-25-2003, 08:54 AM	#3 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	what he said^ she reminds me of my bus driver from high school

09-25-2003, 08:19 PM	#4 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	Ya after i got away from it, the neck is super freakin long... I totally was trying to compensate for the usual no-neck drawings that i make. I'll re-do the color and make an entire new head when i get back

09-25-2003, 10:38 PM	#5 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	its nto bad man ^__^ but try to give the objects around her neck more purpose(they don't look liek armor or weapons at the moment ^__^;; ) also a suggestion for how to make her look less manly would be to make the angle of her chin alot steeper ^__^ hope you can work out that little neck problem but I think the body looks fine ^__^ good luck bro! also.. to analinguist : "marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean." thanky ou man ^__^ and also I'm a "he" not a their lol ^_^;;

09-28-2003, 12:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	I noticed that the lines going into the head are totally fucked up, but since the head is a structural problem... crit this dummy