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the body seems really long (especially the neck, its like ET), the face kind of looks more manly then a girl. i thought that it was a rocker from the 80s, especially with the color palette you are choosing. i don't think that you're coloring is that bad, maybe experiment with different brushes, and not put it on a glowing orange background. also you're color palette is very pastel-ish, maybe some darker tones would help out a little bit. trying playing more with line weight, marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean.
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