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I dunno what the girl's first name is... but i know the last is Shives. She's a pilot :)

Critique please! If anyone knows how to use color in photoshop well, please gimme some tips!

the body seems really long (especially the neck, its like ET), the face kind of looks more manly then a girl. i thought that it was a rocker from the 80s, especially with the color palette you are choosing. i don't think that you're coloring is that bad, maybe experiment with different brushes, and not put it on a glowing orange background. also you're color palette is very pastel-ish, maybe some darker tones would help out a little bit. trying playing more with line weight, marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean.

what he said^ she reminds me of my bus driver from high school

Ya after i got away from it, the neck is super freakin long... I totally was trying to compensate for the usual no-neck drawings that i make. I'll re-do the color and make an entire new head when i get back

its nto bad man ^__^ but try to give the objects around her neck more purpose(they don't look liek armor or weapons at the moment ^__^;; ) also a suggestion for how to make her look less manly would be to make the angle of her chin alot steeper ^__^ hope you can work out that little neck problem but I think the body looks fine ^__^ good luck bro!

also.. to analinguist : "marsfyre does this pretty well (in my opinion) check out their stuff if you want to know what i mean."
thanky ou man ^__^ and also I'm a "he" not a their lol ^_^;;

it looks really good.. one more thing about the neck nobody has yet mentioned is that it seems to bulge from the chin and base of the skull.. i like the red tint in her eyes.. good work!

I noticed that the lines going into the head are totally fucked up, but since the head is a structural problem... crit this dummy

Neck looks long again.. j/k :p

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