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Old 05-21-2003, 08:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
The Cover Doesn't Match The Book
 
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block of wood

Block of wood
6 Wires stretched tight
Thousands of emotions
Scream into the night

It can fuel my happiness
It can feed my pain
Help me reach the highest high
Or make me go insane

Express myself in solitude
Express myself on stage
Show the world my happiness
Show the world my rage

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Soul through hands
From wood to sound
Piercing light of honesty
Through darkness all around
An undiscovered country
Is laid within your hands
Many will enter, few will win
Less will understand

A cycle of twelve
In wood and steel
Tubes burn hot
With fires that heal

What I feel
Is what you hear
An amazing transfer
From soul to ear

The neck is but a canvas
Fingers but a brush
Pictures painted from the heart
Be it loud or but a hush

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Soul through hands
From wood to sound
Piercing light of honesty
Through darkness all around
An undiscovered country
Is laid within your hands
Many will enter, few will win
Less will understand
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Old 05-21-2003, 06:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
The Cover Doesn't Match The Book
 
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34 views and not one reply, thats sad. I guess I expected more in this section. I expect lurkers in the Titty Board...but not here.
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Old 05-22-2003, 04:04 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 05-24-2003, 06:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It almost reads like it's a song. Was this meant to be put to music? Anyway, I liked it.
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Old 05-26-2003, 12:46 PM   #5 (permalink)
The Cover Doesn't Match The Book
 
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it is a song, someday I'll have to figure out a way to link you guys to MP3's of my music.
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Old 05-26-2003, 09:12 PM   #6 (permalink)
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i enjoy this...when u figure out how to transfer into mp3 plz send.
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Old 06-06-2003, 09:28 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I like it cnor.

Describes a guitar player playin' blues to me. Expressing his feelings through the music.
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Old 06-07-2003, 10:28 AM   #8 (permalink)
Fruit on the Bottom Hope on Top
 
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as a guitar player i deffinetly feel that, nice work
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Old 09-09-2003, 02:27 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Well, I liked it as a poem,
I'm sure as a song it is really good,
but I like the written form of it as well.

Pretty cool
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Old 09-09-2003, 04:09 PM   #10 (permalink)
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good use of imagry...you kept my minds eye moving around the stage of your work. thanks...
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Old 09-10-2003, 07:26 AM   #11 (permalink)
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I dont know how I missed this, It's pretty good. Sometimes people just have to read a little before they reply. I have about 838 views and only about thirty or 40 replies. Keep uop the good work, people will start repyling. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 09-10-2003, 08:38 AM   #12 (permalink)
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nice i'd like to hear the melody
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Old 09-10-2003, 08:52 AM   #13 (permalink)
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What I feel
Is what you hear
An amazing transfer
From soul to ear

This is great! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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