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Midnight_Son 05-21-2003 08:49 AM

block of wood
 
Block of wood
6 Wires stretched tight
Thousands of emotions
Scream into the night

It can fuel my happiness
It can feed my pain
Help me reach the highest high
Or make me go insane

Express myself in solitude
Express myself on stage
Show the world my happiness
Show the world my rage

*
Soul through hands
From wood to sound
Piercing light of honesty
Through darkness all around
An undiscovered country
Is laid within your hands
Many will enter, few will win
Less will understand

A cycle of twelve
In wood and steel
Tubes burn hot
With fires that heal

What I feel
Is what you hear
An amazing transfer
From soul to ear

The neck is but a canvas
Fingers but a brush
Pictures painted from the heart
Be it loud or but a hush

*
Soul through hands
From wood to sound
Piercing light of honesty
Through darkness all around
An undiscovered country
Is laid within your hands
Many will enter, few will win
Less will understand

Midnight_Son 05-21-2003 06:33 PM

34 views and not one reply, thats sad. I guess I expected more in this section. I expect lurkers in the Titty Board...but not here.

Midnight_Son 05-22-2003 04:04 AM

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Jadey 05-24-2003 06:27 PM

It almost reads like it's a song. Was this meant to be put to music? Anyway, I liked it.

Midnight_Son 05-26-2003 12:46 PM

it is a song, someday I'll have to figure out a way to link you guys to MP3's of my music.

urgodhere 05-26-2003 09:12 PM

i enjoy this...when u figure out how to transfer into mp3 plz send.

Tirian 06-06-2003 09:28 AM

I like it cnor.

Describes a guitar player playin' blues to me. Expressing his feelings through the music.

Ninja 06-07-2003 10:28 AM

as a guitar player i deffinetly feel that, nice work :)

Esen 09-09-2003 02:27 PM

Well, I liked it as a poem,
I'm sure as a song it is really good,
but I like the written form of it as well.

Pretty cool

chavos 09-09-2003 04:09 PM

good use of imagry...you kept my minds eye moving around the stage of your work. thanks...

J.R.V.A. 09-10-2003 07:26 AM

I dont know how I missed this, It's pretty good. Sometimes people just have to read a little before they reply. I have about 838 views and only about thirty or 40 replies. Keep uop the good work, people will start repyling. Thanks for sharing.

Cynthetiq 09-10-2003 08:38 AM

nice i'd like to hear the melody

Minx 09-10-2003 08:52 AM

What I feel
Is what you hear
An amazing transfer
From soul to ear

This is great! I look forward to reading more of your work.


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