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block of wood
Block of wood
6 Wires stretched tight Thousands of emotions Scream into the night It can fuel my happiness It can feed my pain Help me reach the highest high Or make me go insane Express myself in solitude Express myself on stage Show the world my happiness Show the world my rage * Soul through hands From wood to sound Piercing light of honesty Through darkness all around An undiscovered country Is laid within your hands Many will enter, few will win Less will understand A cycle of twelve In wood and steel Tubes burn hot With fires that heal What I feel Is what you hear An amazing transfer From soul to ear The neck is but a canvas Fingers but a brush Pictures painted from the heart Be it loud or but a hush * Soul through hands From wood to sound Piercing light of honesty Through darkness all around An undiscovered country Is laid within your hands Many will enter, few will win Less will understand |
34 views and not one reply, thats sad. I guess I expected more in this section. I expect lurkers in the Titty Board...but not here.
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It almost reads like it's a song. Was this meant to be put to music? Anyway, I liked it.
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it is a song, someday I'll have to figure out a way to link you guys to MP3's of my music.
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i enjoy this...when u figure out how to transfer into mp3 plz send.
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I like it cnor.
Describes a guitar player playin' blues to me. Expressing his feelings through the music. |
as a guitar player i deffinetly feel that, nice work :)
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Well, I liked it as a poem,
I'm sure as a song it is really good, but I like the written form of it as well. Pretty cool |
good use of imagry...you kept my minds eye moving around the stage of your work. thanks...
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I dont know how I missed this, It's pretty good. Sometimes people just have to read a little before they reply. I have about 838 views and only about thirty or 40 replies. Keep uop the good work, people will start repyling. Thanks for sharing.
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nice i'd like to hear the melody
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What I feel
Is what you hear An amazing transfer From soul to ear This is great! I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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