Seer666

Well, haven't shared one of these with anybody in a long time. Hope you all like it.


Windows and Doors

I see you sitting there day after day
Looking out at the world and all it’s shades of gray
The lonely people walking by
Do you wonder what they say

Just a window in a building
Like any other of it’s kind
But to you it’s all you got
It’s your world and piece of mind
But don’t you know that in the world there’s so much more
And I was hoping, really hoping, you’d let me be your door

Life is hard and trying outside your little room
So you stay here dieing and there’s nothing we can do
I stand under your window with my silent plea
I miss you so much
Miss you so much
Let me be your door, you just have to open me

Days turn into months, months to years
And everyday your window holds strong against my tears
Once a year I break down over come by my own pain
As I lay the flowers in an empty window frame

I saw you sitting there day after day
Looking at the world and all it’s shades of gray
The lonely people walking by
And I wonder what you say

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I am the one you warned me of

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Mephex

Oof.

I really enjoyed that. Nice work.

Seer666

Thank you.

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

vonstalhein

Hehe, 'Oof' is exactly my sentiment. Much better than 'thank you' anyway. I was hooked by the originality of the perspective, and the satisfying rhymes didn't hurt too much either. A job well done.

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ariekitten

wow....*wipes eyes* poetry hardly makes me cry but that is so sad.....and i've experienced that before, so i know how it feels....thank you for sharing...great work!

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JimmyTheHutt

Seer,
As many times as I've seen your stuff, it never fails to do HORRIBLE things to me. Thank you very much. And keep it coming!

Veritas en Lux!
Jimmy The Hutt

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Think Jabba, only with more hair and vestigal legs....

"This isn't a nightmare, its real. Nightmare's end."
-ShadowDancer

JimmyTheHutt

He's got more. All of it good. And mean.

Veritas en Lux!
Jimmy The Hutt

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Think Jabba, only with more hair and vestigal legs....

"This isn't a nightmare, its real. Nightmare's end."
-ShadowDancer

Seer666

Well, I'll have to dig out my files, but I'm sure I can find a few more to hit you with. Give me a day or two.

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

saut

I really like these. Keep it up, you're quite a talented poet.

*Nikki*

Holy crap that was genius

Seer666

Wow. Thank you.

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.