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Memnoch · 03-20-2004, 11:05 PM

Look upon my mind's great plains
Rolling hills and blue-white sky
Lay upon the tickling grass
As great white clouds meander by

All alone - my solitude
My great beyond-all-things
I wait, I sigh mildly
At what my conscious brings

I stand to watch the goings-on
And bow my head to none
Though this strength shows through to me
Great work is never done

I grow and change like the tides
My body meets the sea
Seasons pass, but I'm still here
Waiting stoic'ly.

QuasiMojo · 03-20-2004, 11:46 PM

dance mad fuhrer DANCE

I don't know why, but this great writing is obscured by your sig!

/solemnizing

Memnoch · 03-21-2004, 09:47 AM

There, changed. I hope you can enjoy the writing a little bit more, now.

Memnoch · 04-20-2004, 04:39 PM

You know, I was really hoping to get more responses to this one...it's not often I write serene poetry.

Seer666 · 04-20-2004, 08:16 PM

I enjoyed that a lot. It flows very nicely

Something about this verse that just strikes a cord with me:

I stand to watch the goings-on
And bow my head to none
Though this strength shows through to me
Great work is never done

Keep posting. It's good stuff

03-20-2004, 11:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	Spirit's Lands Look upon my mind's great plains Rolling hills and blue-white sky Lay upon the tickling grass As great white clouds meander by All alone - my solitude My great beyond-all-things I wait, I sigh mildly At what my conscious brings I stand to watch the goings-on And bow my head to none Though this strength shows through to me Great work is never done I grow and change like the tides My body meets the sea Seasons pass, but I'm still here Waiting stoic'ly. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.

03-20-2004, 11:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
QuasiMojo King Knave Location: Lancaster	dance mad fuhrer DANCE I don't know why, but this great writing is obscured by your sig! /solemnizing __________________ AzAbOv ZoBeLoE

03-21-2004, 09:47 AM	#3 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	There, changed. I hope you can enjoy the writing a little bit more, now. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.

04-20-2004, 04:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	You know, I was really hoping to get more responses to this one...it's not often I write serene poetry. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang. Last edited by Memnoch; 04-20-2004 at 04:46 PM..

04-20-2004, 08:16 PM	#5 (permalink)
Seer666 Oh dear God he breeded Location: Arizona	I enjoyed that a lot. It flows very nicely Something about this verse that just strikes a cord with me: I stand to watch the goings-on And bow my head to none Though this strength shows through to me Great work is never done Keep posting. It's good stuff __________________ Bad spellers of the world untie!!! I am the one you warned me of I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.