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MacGnG · 06-30-2003, 11:41 PM

if only to feel like that for a moment,
a moment streched thru time and space,
to force that moment to fill the spaces of emptiness;
what would happend if you could bottle love.
<hr>
friends' response:
i'd take a sip everyday
i drink it all and sleep forever

RelaX · 07-01-2003, 01:40 AM

what would happen if you could bottle love, you'd probably have to mark the bottles 'poetry'.

I love the 'friends response' lines. Somehow I am touched.

Thanks

Angel · 07-01-2003, 03:18 AM

Well look at you tug on my heart strings!
I really like this. So simple, so few words, yet so much!

J.R.V.A. · 07-01-2003, 04:07 AM

Hmmm..... nice work, thanks. What if?.....

MacGnG · 07-01-2003, 09:23 AM

one of my friends said he'd smoke it

lol but anyway

thanks to you, you're welcome.

i was just trying to write an away message and i dunno thats just what came out and then i read it, and couldnt help but share.

not sure about the title, came up with it as i was posting, but i think it fits and its good

Jadey · 07-01-2003, 10:30 AM

Short and sweet. That was great. That just goes to prove that a with a good handle of the english language one can almost describe an undescribable feeling.

Great work, I loved it.

sarcasmo · 07-01-2003, 06:23 PM

Simple in style, but not in feeling. Great post.

MacGnG · 07-01-2003, 11:33 PM

friend sarah's response:
i wouldnt wanna bottle love
cuz it'd b too much to give up just to keep it

06-30-2003, 11:41 PM	#1 (permalink)
MacGnG Know Where!	that moment, forever. if only to feel like that for a moment, a moment streched thru time and space, to force that moment to fill the spaces of emptiness; what would happend if you could bottle love. <hr> friends' response: i'd take a sip everyday i drink it all and sleep forever

07-01-2003, 01:40 AM	#2 (permalink)
RelaX Follower of Ner'Zhul Location: Netherlands	what would happen if you could bottle love, you'd probably have to mark the bottles 'poetry'. I love the 'friends response' lines. Somehow I am touched. Thanks __________________ The most likely way for the world to be destroyed, most experts agree, is by accident. That's where we come in; we're computer professionals. We cause accidents. - Nathaniel Borenstein

07-01-2003, 03:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Well look at you tug on my heart strings! I really like this. So simple, so few words, yet so much! __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

07-01-2003, 04:07 AM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Hmmm..... nice work, thanks. What if?..... __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

07-01-2003, 09:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
MacGnG Know Where!	one of my friends said he'd smoke it lol but anyway thanks to you, you're welcome. i was just trying to write an away message and i dunno thats just what came out and then i read it, and couldnt help but share. not sure about the title, came up with it as i was posting, but i think it fits and its good

07-01-2003, 10:30 AM	#6 (permalink)
Jadey This Space For Rent Location: Davenport, Iowa	Short and sweet. That was great. That just goes to prove that a with a good handle of the english language one can almost describe an undescribable feeling. Great work, I loved it.

07-01-2003, 06:23 PM	#7 (permalink)
sarcasmo Upright Location: Canada	Simple in style, but not in feeling. Great post.

07-01-2003, 11:33 PM	#8 (permalink)
MacGnG Know Where!	friend sarah's response: i wouldnt wanna bottle love cuz it'd b too much to give up just to keep it