that moment, forever.
 

if only to feel like that for a moment,
a moment streched thru time and space,
to force that moment to fill the spaces of emptiness;
what would happend if you could bottle love.
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friends' response:
i'd take a sip everyday
i drink it all and sleep forever

what would happen if you could bottle love, you'd probably have to mark the bottles 'poetry'.

I love the 'friends response' lines. Somehow I am touched.

Thanks :)

Well look at you tug on my heart strings!
I really like this. So simple, so few words, yet so much!

Hmmm..... nice work, thanks. What if?.....

one of my friends said he'd smoke it :p
lol but anyway

thanks to you, you're welcome.

i was just trying to write an away message and i dunno thats just what came out and then i read it, and couldnt help but share.

not sure about the title, came up with it as i was posting, but i think it fits and its good

Short and sweet. That was great. That just goes to prove that a with a good handle of the english language one can almost describe an undescribable feeling.

Great work, I loved it.

Simple in style, but not in feeling. Great post.

friend sarah's response:
i wouldnt wanna bottle love
cuz it'd b too much to give up just to keep it