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that moment, forever.
if only to feel like that for a moment,
a moment streched thru time and space, to force that moment to fill the spaces of emptiness; what would happend if you could bottle love. <hr> friends' response: i'd take a sip everyday i drink it all and sleep forever |
what would happen if you could bottle love, you'd probably have to mark the bottles 'poetry'.
I love the 'friends response' lines. Somehow I am touched. Thanks :) |
Well look at you tug on my heart strings!
I really like this. So simple, so few words, yet so much! |
Hmmm..... nice work, thanks. What if?.....
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one of my friends said he'd smoke it :p
lol but anyway thanks to you, you're welcome. i was just trying to write an away message and i dunno thats just what came out and then i read it, and couldnt help but share. not sure about the title, came up with it as i was posting, but i think it fits and its good |
Short and sweet. That was great. That just goes to prove that a with a good handle of the english language one can almost describe an undescribable feeling.
Great work, I loved it. |
Simple in style, but not in feeling. Great post.
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friend sarah's response:
i wouldnt wanna bottle love cuz it'd b too much to give up just to keep it |
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