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Old 04-13-2004, 02:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
At the Lemonade Stand
 
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Location: in a theater near you!
you may remember these logos

comments/suggestions?
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Old 04-13-2004, 02:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Can you give us folks who don't remember these logos a little background so we may better analize the work?

They're all very pleasing but for different reasons. What are you trying to accomplish?
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Old 04-13-2004, 04:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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are these concept ideas for a class project?

or real life advertising graphic design concepts?

when you figure out just what it is you want us to tell you, then hit up yayhooray for some serious (& sadly some not so serious) real hardcore hold back no punches critique/advice.
it might sting a bit, but overall you'll probably walk away with some solid suggestions.

what is your screenname on YH, btw?
i don't sign in there very often anymore, but my sn on yay is kat.
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Old 04-13-2004, 06:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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this is a portfolio assignment for school, we were given a preselected company out of a phone book and were to design logos, and meet with the teacher (client) about them...the ones i did a long time ago were black and white, and for portfolio i need to have a 1 color, 2 color, cmyk, and one of whatever i want....i believe my name on yayhooray is ruinedbydesign
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Old 04-13-2004, 10:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The first and the last are the best. The other ones really don't remind one of a café do they?
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Old 04-14-2004, 01:09 AM   #6 (permalink)
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First, café has to have the little ´ over the e.
Second, nice logos. I think the first one is a little too basic, that kind of croissant you would see on a ferry or a train station. The font os good though. The second is too exclusive for a deli, but it would work really well with an expensive restaurant.
I like the two last ones, the first of the two would work well if the café was situated in a fitness centre or something, and the last one is just plain cool and really stylish. It's the colour of a good latte.
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Old 04-14-2004, 05:21 AM   #7 (permalink)
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hey GW!

Great improvements.. I see you added the croissant to the first one.. still like that last one though, is it up to the 'client' to decide which one they like best? So you state your ideas and they pick which one they want? heh.. either way cool
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Old 04-14-2004, 10:37 AM   #8 (permalink)
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they liked them all, favorites were the first one (which i changed the color of the type: garducci=midtone brown and deli and cafe=a differnt light blue), and the last one...so they're all going into portfolio

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Old 04-18-2004, 06:09 AM   #9 (permalink)
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it does all depend on the type of cafe it is, if it is a gourmet place or just a little small coffee shop. but, the bottom right one is the strongest.. the only thing that bothers me is the curved left edge. i thing that it is nice to have the rounded corners, but the rounded left edge makes it look really weird. it makes it look less intentional and less clean of a design.
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Old 04-19-2004, 08:35 AM   #10 (permalink)
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i agree, that's one thing i need to do before the FINAL print
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Old 04-19-2004, 12:09 PM   #11 (permalink)
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The last one is definitely the best one. It does look a bit like a logo you might design for a franchise or a brand for a range of coffee shops. I do sympathise though. I can remember doing things like this at school, and until you have a proper brief from someone in the real world, it-s really impossible to come to a real conclusion about the quality and suitability of a design to do a job. I speak as one who's don e loads of corporate identities since - in the real world. Well done though. Keep on keeping on...
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Old 04-21-2004, 11:52 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I really like the 2 on the right- the other two don't really say "cafe/deli" to me. Depends on the atmosphere, theme, setting, etc.
But they are all great designs!
 
Old 04-26-2004, 01:11 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I love the top 2. They are nice
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Old 04-26-2004, 04:43 PM   #14 (permalink)
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The first and the last are the best. The other ones really don't remind one of a café do they?
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