Yay! Rave girl with Goggles! - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

la petite moi · 11-10-2003, 10:12 PM

I was happy with this. There are some things I could change, but hey- its cool.

Rough draft....

31Friction · 11-10-2003, 10:15 PM

I think the eyepiece on the left (her right) is too big by proportion but other than that I like the image.

majik_6 · 11-10-2003, 10:39 PM

That's some really nice work.

I love the style/subject matter, I love the whole "alternative" look.

I doubt I would have even noticed the perspective on the goggles it it hadn't been pointed out.

Thanks for posting!

la petite moi · 11-10-2003, 10:58 PM

Yeah thats one of the mistakes I made. ::shakes head::

majik_6 · 11-10-2003, 11:23 PM

I wouldn't worry about it.

Like I said, it's not at all noticable. I have that same problem myself, but much more noticably!

What type of pencils (I assume it's pencil) did you use?

la petite moi · 11-11-2003, 08:24 AM

Just boring old number 2! =) I guess dull works better because I was lazy and refused to get up and sharpen my pencil.

analinguist · 11-11-2003, 09:20 AM

different style than most of the stuff i've seen on the forum, looks pretty good..

majik_6 · 11-11-2003, 09:57 AM

Wow, those are pretty good value changes to be using a #2 pencil!

I really like the (for lack of a better word) background that you're using (or maybe it's a border). It's interesting how the top seems to recede into space, like it's more of a plane than just an outline of a square or something. I also like the play between the figure being behind the border, and then overlapping it at the top. Very nice.

la petite moi · 11-11-2003, 10:10 AM

Thanks!! I think the spikes coming out of the border I did was something I did at the last second. I asked my Lover what he thought I should do with the hair, and he said spikes- so I added those in at the last most. The border was something that I drew first, and then drew the girl in. =) If you want, I'll post the rough draft, hang on just a sec....

la petite moi · 11-14-2003, 10:45 AM

Aight, it's posted. Thanks for the comments!

Gortexfogg · 11-14-2003, 02:43 PM

Very cool work. Very good job drawing her posture. She is in a sort of weird position, but it looks natural and not forced.

MoNoXiDe_XXX · 11-14-2003, 09:13 PM

I like that alot, Spikes are wicked cool.

RemyLebeau97 · 11-14-2003, 10:29 PM

That's kick ass, I'd make the left goggle lense a lil smaller but other than that it's dope.

Neato · 11-14-2003, 11:48 PM

Yea, this is wicked cool. I wanna hang it on my wall.

SSJwrestler · 11-16-2003, 01:22 AM

hairstyle is TOIGHT!

jvwgtr · 11-19-2003, 09:57 AM

Oh, I like this very much!
Great work!

Peetster · 11-19-2003, 10:15 AM

You perfectly captured the subtle shading around the base of her breast. Very nice work.

clavus · 11-19-2003, 09:47 PM

nice work!

fro2020 · 11-20-2003, 08:24 AM

Have to agree with the other posts in that your work with a simple #2 pencil is fairly impressive

-Ever- · 11-20-2003, 12:52 PM

I like it a lot. Just sent it to my email address cause I'm in an internet cafe :/

majik_6 · 11-24-2003, 11:59 AM

Thanks for posting the first draft, it kinda helps to see where the final's coming from!

It's also interesting to see the pencil becoming dull as the drawings progress!

11-24-2003, 03:44 PM

very interesting subject. good start

la petite moi · 11-26-2003, 03:30 PM

Thanks everyone!! What great supportive compliments!

anti fishstick · 11-27-2003, 12:39 PM

the rough draft looks cool
i like sketchiness

this would be a good candidate for photoshopping and adding colors, etc.

minyn · 12-03-2003, 03:32 PM

rough draft is cool but somehow her arms dont look right. they look to flexible? i think.... perhaps cuz i lack the flexibility. who knows

still cool

gallopingwanker · 12-03-2003, 07:54 PM

nicely drawn elbow on the left arm....i notice little stuff like that....

11-10-2003, 10:12 PM	#1 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Yay! Rave girl with Goggles! I was happy with this. There are some things I could change, but hey- its cool. Rough draft.... Last edited by la petite moi; 11-11-2003 at 10:12 AM..

11-10-2003, 10:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
31Friction Addict Location: STL, MO	I think the eyepiece on the left (her right) is too big by proportion but other than that I like the image. __________________ "Saints need sinners." Alan Watts

11-10-2003, 10:39 PM	#3 (permalink)
majik_6 narcissist Location: looking in a mirror	That's some really nice work. I love the style/subject matter, I love the whole "alternative" look. I doubt I would have even noticed the perspective on the goggles it it hadn't been pointed out. Thanks for posting! __________________ it's all about self-indulgence

11-10-2003, 11:23 PM	#5 (permalink)
majik_6 narcissist Location: looking in a mirror	I wouldn't worry about it. Like I said, it's not at all noticable. I have that same problem myself, but much more noticably! What type of pencils (I assume it's pencil) did you use? __________________ it's all about self-indulgence

11-11-2003, 09:20 AM	#7 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	different style than most of the stuff i've seen on the forum, looks pretty good.. __________________ end

11-10-2003, 10:58 PM	#4 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Yeah thats one of the mistakes I made. ::shakes head::

11-11-2003, 08:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Just boring old number 2! =) I guess dull works better because I was lazy and refused to get up and sharpen my pencil.

11-11-2003, 09:57 AM	#8 (permalink)
majik_6 narcissist Location: looking in a mirror	Wow, those are pretty good value changes to be using a #2 pencil! I really like the (for lack of a better word) background that you're using (or maybe it's a border). It's interesting how the top seems to recede into space, like it's more of a plane than just an outline of a square or something. I also like the play between the figure being behind the border, and then overlapping it at the top. Very nice. __________________ it's all about self-indulgence

11-11-2003, 10:10 AM	#9 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Thanks!! I think the spikes coming out of the border I did was something I did at the last second. I asked my Lover what he thought I should do with the hair, and he said spikes- so I added those in at the last most. The border was something that I drew first, and then drew the girl in. =) If you want, I'll post the rough draft, hang on just a sec....

11-14-2003, 10:45 AM	#10 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Aight, it's posted. Thanks for the comments!

11-14-2003, 02:43 PM	#11 (permalink)
Gortexfogg I and I Location: Stillwater, OK	Very cool work. Very good job drawing her posture. She is in a sort of weird position, but it looks natural and not forced.

11-14-2003, 09:13 PM	#12 (permalink)
MoNoXiDe_XXX Psycho Location: Thunder Bay	I like that alot, Spikes are wicked cool. __________________ ------------------------ I may be ugly, But at least I aint got no money!

11-14-2003, 10:29 PM	#13 (permalink)
RemyLebeau97 I stole my boyfriends TFP, hehe !! Location: Galveston, TX	That's kick ass, I'd make the left goggle lense a lil smaller but other than that it's dope.

11-14-2003, 11:48 PM	#14 (permalink)
Neato Insane Location: The Oposite, Inverse of Hell (Wisconsin)	Yea, this is wicked cool. I wanna hang it on my wall.

11-16-2003, 01:22 AM	#15 (permalink)
SSJwrestler Banned Location: Davidson, NC/ Manassas, VA	hairstyle is TOIGHT!

11-19-2003, 09:47 PM	#18 (permalink)
clavus pow! Location: NorCal	nice work! __________________ Ass, gas or grass. Nobody rides for free.

11-20-2003, 12:52 PM	#20 (permalink)
-Ever- Junkie Location: San Francisco	I like it a lot. Just sent it to my email address cause I'm in an internet cafe :/ __________________ Embracing the goddess energy within yourselves will bring all of you to a new understanding and valuing of life. A vision that inspires you to live and love on planet Earth. Like a priceless jewel buried in dark layers of soil and stone, Earth radiates her brilliant beauty into the caverns of space and time. Perhaps you are aware of those who watch over your home And experience of this place to visit and play with reality. You are becoming aware of yourself as a gamemaster... --Acknowledge your weaknesses--

11-19-2003, 09:57 AM	#16 (permalink)
jvwgtr Completely bananas Location: Florida	Oh, I like this very much! Great work!

11-19-2003, 10:15 AM	#17 (permalink)
Peetster Right Now Location: Home	You perfectly captured the subtle shading around the base of her breast. Very nice work.

11-20-2003, 08:24 AM	#19 (permalink)
fro2020 Still crazy after all these years Location: Norther Cal	Have to agree with the other posts in that your work with a simple #2 pencil is fairly impressive __________________ I'm not prejudiced...I hate everyone equally.

11-24-2003, 11:59 AM	#21 (permalink)
majik_6 narcissist Location: looking in a mirror	Thanks for posting the first draft, it kinda helps to see where the final's coming from! It's also interesting to see the pencil becoming dull as the drawings progress! __________________ it's all about self-indulgence

11-24-2003, 03:44 PM	#22 (permalink)
wpulley Guest	very interesting subject. good start

11-26-2003, 03:30 PM	#23 (permalink)
la petite moi Filling the Void. Location: California	Thanks everyone!! What great supportive compliments!

11-27-2003, 12:39 PM	#24 (permalink)
anti fishstick Post-modernism meets Individualism AKA the Clash Location: oregon	the rough draft looks cool i like sketchiness this would be a good candidate for photoshopping and adding colors, etc. __________________ And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom. ~Anais Nin

12-03-2003, 03:32 PM	#25 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	rough draft is cool but somehow her arms dont look right. they look to flexible? i think.... perhaps cuz i lack the flexibility. who knows still cool __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

12-03-2003, 07:54 PM	#26 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	nicely drawn elbow on the left arm....i notice little stuff like that....