Yay! Rave girl with Goggles!
 

I was happy with this. There are some things I could change, but hey- its cool.

http://elftown.lysator.liu.se/img/dr...1068521173.jpg

http://elftown.lysator.liu.se/img/dr...1068570944.jpg
Rough draft....

I think the eyepiece on the left (her right) is too big by proportion but other than that I like the image.

That's some really nice work.

I love the style/subject matter, I love the whole "alternative" look.

I doubt I would have even noticed the perspective on the goggles it it hadn't been pointed out.

Thanks for posting!

Yeah thats one of the mistakes I made. ::shakes head::

I wouldn't worry about it.

Like I said, it's not at all noticable. I have that same problem myself, but much more noticably!

What type of pencils (I assume it's pencil) did you use?

Just boring old number 2! =) I guess dull works better because I was lazy and refused to get up and sharpen my pencil.

different style than most of the stuff i've seen on the forum, looks pretty good..

Wow, those are pretty good value changes to be using a #2 pencil!

I really like the (for lack of a better word) background that you're using (or maybe it's a border). It's interesting how the top seems to recede into space, like it's more of a plane than just an outline of a square or something. I also like the play between the figure being behind the border, and then overlapping it at the top. Very nice.

Thanks!! I think the spikes coming out of the border I did was something I did at the last second. I asked my Lover what he thought I should do with the hair, and he said spikes- so I added those in at the last most. The border was something that I drew first, and then drew the girl in. =) If you want, I'll post the rough draft, hang on just a sec....

Aight, it's posted. Thanks for the comments!

Very cool work. Very good job drawing her posture. She is in a sort of weird position, but it looks natural and not forced.

I like that alot, Spikes are wicked cool.

That's kick ass, I'd make the left goggle lense a lil smaller but other than that it's dope.

Yea, this is wicked cool. I wanna hang it on my wall. :D

hairstyle is TOIGHT!

Oh, I like this very much!
Great work!

You perfectly captured the subtle shading around the base of her breast. Very nice work.

nice work!

Have to agree with the other posts in that your work with a simple #2 pencil is fairly impressive

I like it a lot. Just sent it to my email address cause I'm in an internet cafe :/

Thanks for posting the first draft, it kinda helps to see where the final's coming from!

It's also interesting to see the pencil becoming dull as the drawings progress! :)

very interesting subject. good start :)

Thanks everyone!! What great supportive compliments!

the rough draft looks cool
i like sketchiness

this would be a good candidate for photoshopping and adding colors, etc.

rough draft is cool but somehow her arms dont look right. they look to flexible? i think.... perhaps cuz i lack the flexibility. who knows

still cool

nicely drawn elbow on the left arm....i notice little stuff like that....