battlemouth

feedback is appreciated, i just make them for fun but i enjoy some good ol criticism. They;re smaller than normal because they were too big to be posted. if you want the normal size PM me and i'll send it to you over e-mail or something.

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battlemouth

heres the other

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battlemouth

i just noticed a big mistake on the 2nd one i made pretend that says "it not your fault it gets this hard" wow i feel rather silly, atleast i noticed before anyone could make fun

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Snoogans

I'm not sure what it is, but I like them.
How do you make them?

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mb99usa

Those are pretty cool. I love that you stuck to black and white.

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analinguist

to the trained eye this looks like visual diarreah, being that it is obvious use of photoshop filters and super cluttered. i can't see this as being used as a wallpaper, i think that your desktop icons would get lost in there. BUT there are some interesting things going on as well, more so in the christ on the cross picture. i almost feel like if you just had that white cross on there with just that grey distressed background it would be fine. the theory, commonly oversaid, but quite true "less is more" would show more power and emphasis to the cross. just an idea.. keep it up.

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feartheraiders6

I like it... don't listen to anybody else

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battlemouth

thanks for the criticism analinguist, i'll try using less and see how it comes out. thanks to everyone else for the comments, i'll post some more that im working on soon

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petergriffin24

yeah I like them just don't know if I would use them as wallpaper but still cool nonetheless

GoldenOuroboros

I'm still learning like yourself battlemouth, you can see some of my pics in this part of the forum too... the subject is well and that you stuck to black and white is a cool idea. I do agree with Analiguist on the less is more thing.. especially in that first one cause I keep being drawn to the white cross where I think your focal might be the christ on the cross?

But anyways.. cool work and keep on photoshopping and posting so we can enjoy, criticise and help you on your way to... *ponders where you can go with this..* anyways.. yeah

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gallopingwanker

if you don't take other peoples advice and criticism, you'll never get better

battlemouth

thanks for the support Goldenouroboros i'll post some more stuff when i make it

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analinguist

amen wanker

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