I'm still learning like yourself battlemouth, you can see some of my pics in this part of the forum too... the subject is well and that you stuck to black and white is a cool idea. I do agree with Analiguist on the less is more thing.. especially in that first one cause I keep being drawn to the white cross where I think your focal might be the christ on the cross?
But anyways.. cool work and keep on photoshopping and posting so we can enjoy, criticise and help you on your way to... *ponders where you can go with this..* anyways.. yeah