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the first poem i'm posting on here
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05-01-2003, 03:07 PM
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Fallon
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Good imagary, good part on the trying to fill in the empty spaces. Definately can relate to that. Don't know if you need to worry about the punctuation. Was your spacing intentional, or accident?
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