Wow. Thank you for sharing such beautiful work.
They bring out the intense sadness I have been feeling lately. I cannot put into words the feeling of extreme sadness that has been invoked by these.
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I tend to lose myself in my own head
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You're not the only one. I get lost in my head too...
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My own desire for an end
If I did not have so much to lose
I would give myself over willingly
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I have almost lost the will to fight
The will to live
The will to be
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That sounds very much like suicide... I hope you're not suicidal. This second poem strike me very deeply. I think this is largely due to it putting into words thoughts and feelings very similar to what I have recently had. I had not yet been able to put it into poetry. Here you have portrayed those thoughts and feelings. Thank you.