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quadro2000 · 11-06-2003, 10:04 AM

DUDE!

Nice work! I really like both songs - they're both really catchy, both hard-rockin' with a strong melody. You are a very talented writer.

In the first song, I think the vocals need to be up a little more. I LOVE your main riff. It's awesome.

Second song is also really good. Nice harmonies. I'd actually be curious to hear what harmonies would sound like earlier in the chorus before they come in on "one last time."

My only thoughts on it - and I don't think these are criticisms per se, the songs are great as they are, just my thoughts on what I would try if it were me -

1) In the verses, I don't know if that's a synth or something playing in the background - I would be interested in hearing what it would sound like without that track - so it's just the vocal in between the drum beats.

2) Instead of the final resolution (the two strums) at the end of the song...what if you just let it fade out after the final "one last time..." my personal opinion is that it doesn't necessarily need that resolution...

Again, just my thoughts, hope you don't take offense to them or anything. You guys have a lot of potential! Great work.

(edit: the page with your arcade set-up is amazing!)

11-06-2003, 10:04 AM	#3 (permalink)
quadro2000 All Possibility, Made Of Custard Location: New York, NY	DUDE! Nice work! I really like both songs - they're both really catchy, both hard-rockin' with a strong melody. You are a very talented writer. In the first song, I think the vocals need to be up a little more. I LOVE your main riff. It's awesome. Second song is also really good. Nice harmonies. I'd actually be curious to hear what harmonies would sound like earlier in the chorus before they come in on "one last time." My only thoughts on it - and I don't think these are criticisms per se, the songs are great as they are, just my thoughts on what I would try if it were me - 1) In the verses, I don't know if that's a synth or something playing in the background - I would be interested in hearing what it would sound like without that track - so it's just the vocal in between the drum beats. 2) Instead of the final resolution (the two strums) at the end of the song...what if you just let it fade out after the final "one last time..." my personal opinion is that it doesn't necessarily need that resolution... Again, just my thoughts, hope you don't take offense to them or anything. You guys have a lot of potential! Great work. (edit: the page with your arcade set-up is amazing!) __________________ You have to laugh at yourself...because you'd cry your eyes out if you didn't. - Emily Saliers Last edited by quadro2000; 11-06-2003 at 10:07 AM..