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Needed - Several brave souls
- Needed : Several brave souls -
Darkened Skies has reached a milestone.. 5000 words (well actually its 5019)..
What I need are several people to read through what I have, and make suggestions.
- Are the characters realistic
- Is the description good
- Is the feel... cliched? or creative?
- Is the basic idea of the story and the setting understandable?
- If you picked up this in a book store and read what is here, would you want to read it enough to buy a copy?
I dont have a website currently to put the file, and I didnt want to put 5000 words here on tfproject (if no one wants to read it, why take up the bandwidth and HD space) I can email it, or if there are enough people, and I wont get lynched for it, I'll post it here..
" fill my lungs with fear, then exhale.. It's my turn to fly"
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"Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?"
-- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death
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