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Originally posted by Jimmy4
When I read it I had a good beat in the background. Everything else just flowed, but when you hit that line, it just gets choppy for a little bit. The run away train with no conductor is good, but it starts getting choppy at destination unknown. The words just don't flow like the rest. Then again, that was with a slower Timbaland beat. Read to a faster beat in more of an Eminem fashion it gets by better, but rapping like Eminem is hangs up on the "I ask the crowd to become silent line" You could probably just scrap that line altogether.
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Thanks man..Much appreciated, I haven't tried rappin this over a beat yet..And Every verse that I have posted in this thread...I always try to rap it in an Eminem type flow like you mentioned...I am not sure why, but it just seems to go better that way..I guess you feel the same way also.
And I was also thinking about scrapping that line that you mentioned...But since you and K-Wise are the only two leaving comments..I will just go with what you guys think is best, I'm sure K-Wise will say the same thing about that one line being scrapped.
Thanks Again...Do you happen to write any ryhmes yourself? If so, post them here...If you want that is.
Thanks again for the feedback.