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When I read it I had a good beat in the background. Everything else just flowed, but when you hit that line, it just gets choppy for a little bit. The run away train with no conductor is good, but it starts getting choppy at destination unknown. The words just don't flow like the rest. Then again, that was with a slower Timbaland beat. Read to a faster beat in more of an Eminem fashion it gets by better, but rapping like Eminem is hangs up on the "I ask the crowd to become silent line" You could probably just scrap that line altogether.
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One day an Englishman, a Scotsman, and an Irishman walked into a pub together. They each bought a pint of Guinness. Just as they were about to enjoy their creamy beverage, three flies landed in each of their pints. The Englishman pushed his beer away in disgust. The Scotsman fished the fly out of his beer and continued drinking it, as if nothing had happened. The Irishman, too, picked the fly out of his drink but then held it out over the beer and yelled "SPIT IT OUT, SPIT IT OUT, YOU BASTARD!"
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