Ok...I am making this thread for Hip Hop fans that have a love for the music...I just recently started to scribble down my own lyrics...I am asking for honest opinions from hip hop fans and anybody else...If you don't like it say so in a nice way or make a suggestion on what would fit better. All compliments & Suggestions are welcome
Thanks go out to K-Wise for helping me out on changing little things to give it a nicer flow...Not all of the lyrics have been edited or moved around...these are just...Rough copy's I guess you could call them....Straight from my mind to the pages of TFP.
Now these are not full Track lyrics...More like Battle ryhmes...I am gonna post what I have got so far..but I don't know if I consider these complete or not.
K-Wise...Feel free to post your own shit here too and any other MC's that are writing ryhmes...I do not consider myself an actual MC...But the past few hours I have been writing alot of shit down and find myself getting addicted to it.
So Remember..Don't bring the hate if you can't relate.
Ok here's the first one
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Yo...This Mind & pen got the skillz to end life...You want a piece of me I burn you like a bag of weed to the fullest degree...Makin you wish you never Challenged thee....I stay undetected..Then at first given chance I snap necks with flow that I represent...makin sure you feel this...Burn into your mind and feel my infectious ryhmes take full effect..Letting you know you a amatuer and I'm the vet.
I'm a cure & disease...Fuckin you up verbally..Mentally & Introvenously..with the words I speak.
I'm a cure for the MC's with a dream...Come follow in my footsteps and have a shot at the King.
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I got the recipe for success, Keepin it real at all times and don't let money infect the mind...spit the ill shit that real hiphop heads expect...collect as much respect that you can get...Passion comes first..Money comes last..Do it in that order or your going knowhere fast...I want the whole world to witness this...I'm furious...grab the mic and give your best shot...I'm ready and got my shit cocked, This mic is like an automatic weapon..It's pointing in your direction..I don't need no infared beam to hit you..My ryhmes are heat sinking they will penetrate and go right through you...I hold it to your head tempted to Squeeze...I spit like a heavyweight hits..Making you bleed..One more ryhme from me and you will wish this was all a dream...What? You want more...That was just a tease, I will penetrate your Mug and chest with much ease...Your having a hard time breathing..I can tell...You start to lose all feeling...keepin it real son sendin you straight to hell...
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I am a new breed...Peeps never heard of me they all try to step to thee..illest MC, Trying to phase IC3...You step up and get smacked down..I don't fuck around, bring a better sound next time your in my town...I smoke you like i smoke a spliff..Understand I am the man with the talented gift...You just another punk tryin to earn respect..I stab you in the face with my lit ciggarette...I got a 9 that will allow me to see the inside of your mind.
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Last one for now
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Check this...I see you wanna battle me, Step up..I don't take no resonsibility of the actions I make..Your risking your life against a Venomous Snake..I will stalk you, makin you freeze in 1 spot..You wanna move & run but you can't cause I got it locked...When you least expect I will Beam my Poisonous venom into your blood stream...you start to hallucinate..seeing things that only your mind can create...I just gave you a sample of what could end your life..Ask for mercy and thou shall recieve, Now you have 1 more chance at battling thee.
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that's currently what I have...I am just sharing this to get other Hip Hop Heads Opinions on it...If you think it's not that great, Then fine...But say it in a nice way.
Thanks...There will be more to come soon.
I would really like if other people shared there hip hop lryics here also.