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I love the alternation between the English and French. In fact, the French bits are my favorite (partially due to French sounding so damnably romantic, at least to an English speaker), and your rhythm works quite well despite the general lack of rhyme (which works for you, even when you DO rhyme) and balance (although that's part of its' appeal, for me - the fact that the lines aren't "equal" works for you, as well, strangely enough).
Anyways, thanks for sharing.
Hope to hear more outa' you.
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