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sub zero · 08-17-2003, 07:20 AM

I hate this tie

I feel the steam rising from your mocha flavored curiosity.
Do you feel the condensation brewing from my stinging animosity?
Listen to my adams apple thump rhythmic with my anger,
Because next time I get to be choosy, I'm leaving you on the hanger.

Woohoo keep it giong!

J.R.V.A. and SnotGoblin I like your poems! Yall are really good too, I sortuh didn't expect you all to be <i>that</i> good.

08-17-2003, 07:20 AM	#4 (permalink)
sub zero Addict Location: The one state that doesn't have black outs: TEXAS BABY!!!	I hate this tie I feel the steam rising from your mocha flavored curiosity. Do you feel the condensation brewing from my stinging animosity? Listen to my adams apple thump rhythmic with my anger, Because next time I get to be choosy, I'm leaving you on the hanger. Woohoo keep it giong! J.R.V.A. and SnotGoblin I like your poems! Yall are really good too, I sortuh didn't expect you all to be <i>that</i> good. __________________ Did you Google it yet? Join the TFP Typing team!! Last edited by sub zero; 08-17-2003 at 07:24 AM..