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Old 07-23-2003, 05:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
thumper
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Ryan,

That's a pretty good song. I REALLY like the last verse. Excellent job on the wording there, and I like the added bit at the end where he holds out the "yooouuuu"(in the blank spot that they teased you with on the first 2 verses by not singing anything there). So, lyrically, it's pretty good. Musically, I was finding myself wanting to hear some more distinct changes between the bridge, refrain, and verses, but it works out good the way it is. Overall, I would definately give it a good listening to. Good job, and thumbs up! Work a good guitar hook in there, and you've got yourself a single.

--Thumper
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