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Thank you fleep... like I said, I love feedback... which is neither criticism or praise and always constructive...
And now for a response...
Thank you for saying I have talent, I suspect it seeing as I already have 3 poems that are published, but I know I'm still a long way from professional or even great work.
I know that I somewhat lack linguistic skill at the moment and the subject of the poem is rather light, but as I said, they were teenage poems, written by (at the time) a 17 year old Dutch boy.
I'm even goanna have to look up forlorn... lol.
I still have a lot to learn, of life and of language so I'm not really expecting anything from what I write except experiance.
Once more, thanks...
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