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Don't apologize for anything. Based on your last thread, you're on your way out the door anyway, so don't give them a reason. In other words, drop the last sentence in the next to last paragraph.
Without knowing what's on the rest of the evaluation, it's hard to know if you're coming across as a needy bitch or not. I would self-edit for that.
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