I like it, a lot, EVERY WORD.
If you do that kind of thing (and here I refer to that particular style of dirty talk), well, there is a technique...it's hard to break down, but you gotta trust the other person to a degree and you also have to believe what they are saying at that point to a degree. It's gotta be...authentic. Convincing.
Anyways, well done MM. It definitely works for me.