I really like it. It's straight-forward, simple, and hits a lot of major demographics just by featuring a child and a grandparent.
Technical notes:
Good use of angles- there aren't too many (a common problem), and you didn't attempt anything crazy just to be "unique". The angles are complimentary to the set and the poses of the characters, and change smoothly to highlight actions.
The birds' singing is too loud. I like it at the very beginning, but I feel like it'd better serve the atmosphere if the birds faded out (and stayed gone) as the music fades in at 0:04 - 0:05. If they're kept in, they should at least be dialed down, they're too loud for ambiance.
Great job with the lighting- it's bright and evenly lit without being blown out or cave-like.
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