Yeah this is definitely an interesting one, I mean, I've thought about an albert but the mental images of metal piercing that area is just too much for me. Much respect to you.
I have to say though, the way you wrote it with x time after, building up, I kept expecting you to suddenly write, "THERES A FOUNTAIN OF BLOOD COMING OUT OF MY PANTS AHHH HELP". I'm glad you had no real problems.
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