Thanks ng, I like the way yours reads much better than mine.
Jazz, remember how I said I was a mediocre writer? What is the passive voice? I've somehow never actually been taught anything about writing. At some point during my education just making me write longer papers more often became equivalent to teaching me how to write. Not that it isn't my fault for not knowing, I just never had to learn. I'm going to go hunting for information now but if you could point me in a reliable direction, I'd be appreciative.
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The advantage law is the best law in rugby, because it lets you ignore all the others for the good of the game.
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