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" new gender minorities seat created in"...'new' and 'created' are more or less redundant-use just 'new' to convey the creation of the seat.
" seen a single individual reply"...again, redundancy as 'single' and 'individual' are the same thing.
I'll post a version of the letter later.
My corrected version up to the point where it's just fine as is:
The vote about whether or not the new gender minorities seat in student government should have been debated before taking place. Currently, on the college forums, there is debate and anyone interested in hearing both sides should take a look. I have not seen a single reply that the students of the LGBT community do not deserve representation based on being members of said community. Wherever this stated ‘closeted homophobia’ on campus might be, I have not yet found it.
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Don't blame me. I didn't vote for either of'em.
Last edited by ngdawg; 04-13-2007 at 07:16 PM..
Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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