I suck at critiquing, so I will just say how I would have changed it if I shot it. Gonna sound kind of harsh probably.
1st shot I would have used a wider lens to get the window and full door, or narrower and changed the composition in order to eliminate the window, put the dog higher in frame (get his back foot in frame), and get him out of the center of the frame.
Shot 2 doesn't do much for me. Fill flashed falling apart wall. Would have underexposed the shot and post processed it to add drama because, and I mean no offense, it seems quite boring.
Shot 3 I would have raised the camera, lowered the angle. Less sky, more buildings. Straightened the horizion in photoshop.
Shot 4 I would have found a better angle to show whats going on. As it stands, I feel it almost looks like the rope and such was an accident in capturing a fairly boring (due to lighting) landscape.
Shot 5. Interesting idea. Dunno how I would have changed it.
Shot 6 is fighting with itself. Whats the focus? Is it suppose to be the sky, or the trees? Its either got too much foreground or not enough foreground... not sure what you were going for.
Last shot. Different angle, remove subject from frame center. Probably tried to get much closer to the subject.
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