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Really interesting stuff.
I don't know exactly what I'm feeling, yet, but I really admire what you did with this piece. It's an interesting read and I feel like the writing style communicated as much about the message as the words themselves. I feel like the abundance of different thoughts and the unfinished rant about hate crimes bring this to life. It gives it more energy and movement. It may not be traditional, but I dig it.
For some reason this really makes me think of Ellis or Palahniuk (two of my favorites).
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