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I think the contrasts work great.
The only suggestion I would have made would be that the left end of the line of trees have been your centerpoint, rather than the largest portion. The reason for this is two-fold; the dark thingy on the right would be out of the picture and there would be a line for the eye to follow across the shot rather than just concentrating on its center.(well, 3fold, if there was more color to the left too)
With wide-angle, the purpose should be to lead the eye across the entirety of the composition to a point of interest. It's natural to go straight for the center otherwise and with the trees where they are, we don't see the beauty around them so much.
JJ's right, you have a good eye. Keep practicing!
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