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for what it's worth,
i had no idea what crosstalk was,
but from watching your video,
i was able to figure it out.
and i think the music has a certain "VHS instructional video" quality.
not necessarily a good thing, but it does fit.
it might be made more unique/modern
by adding music (as tippler mentioned) more up to date.
...i'm imagining a radiohead-ish mash of computer generated beats & tunes
with a new, perhaps discordant track at the time of crosstalk.
but it sounds like the assignment is finished,
and these suggestions will go nowhere...
the visuals are perfect.
nice work.
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xoxo
doodle
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