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Third paragraph, second last sentence: "I approached them and mentioned the footprints on my car that."
Other than ending that sentence without saying what "that" is, it looks like a good letter. It's very respectful and outlines the reasons you'll be looking for other accomodations, which looks better on you than simply stating that you're leaving.
Sorry to hear about your situation, it sounds pretty awful.
-Tamerlain
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