Poetry is always good, and so is yours. My personal take is irrelevant to just "How" good your work is, you just need to write it down and let it effect who it will.
If you want critique, we can give it....but this forum is much like a journal for many, a place to express yourself.
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha
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