Everything in your letter is I, I, I; I can do this, I have done that, etc. Instead of just saying "I can do this", say "My ability to do this would benefit your company this way". Don't just say what you can do. Say why being able to do it would make you the perfect person for the job. It might require a little research into the organization, but it'll help you sell yourself a lot better. Remember, the person doing the hiring is looking for someone who's the right person for their company, and you want to make it easy for them to see you as that person. Show that you're interested in them, and it makes it more likely that they'll be interested in you.
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