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Old 11-06-2005, 08:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
vonstalhein
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Location: Where You Live.
Well...look who it is! Never thought i'd see this poem here! Anyway man, it's great, suitably cryptic. The last two lines are my favourites. I could write a whole essay on your use of the word 'That'! Fancy some constructive criticism?

(write more. That isn't the criticism by the way.)
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