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The form is good....thought the message eludes me.
Maybe I'm just missing it.
I read the poem three times hoping to gain insight into what you intended to say in it....and am still trying.
I do very much like the "Way" it is written though.
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha
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