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sup k.
i dig it - i wouldn't work too hard to get rid of the rhythm. i kinda like it.
one thing i might change is that "someone" / "anyone" aspects of it to a more direct "her" or "you".
the way it is now, it seems as though you're looking for ANYTHING, when it might be a bit more meaningful if you take the approach that you know SHE is out there somewhere. and you're just trying to find her.
just an idea... hope all is well.
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doodle
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