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K-Wise · 04-30-2005, 03:31 AM

^ Thanx!!

Wee. I almost put <i>left you sleeping...</i> at the end but as it was coming to a close I thought NO end it at "just" and place emphasis on it..it will make it more powerful...especially in spoken word (I should make one for this) because I felt it gave a certain sense of submission...like I couldn't bring myself to say it again..which I couldn't.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have more works but they're scattered throughout the forum. I think 2 or 3 more actual poems(Or what I considered poems), a couple of weekly activities, and the rest are all some of my rap lyrics that I posted.

Asta!!

04-30-2005, 03:31 AM	#13 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	^ Thanx!! Wee. I almost put <i>left you sleeping...</i> at the end but as it was coming to a close I thought NO end it at "just" and place emphasis on it..it will make it more powerful...especially in spoken word (I should make one for this) because I felt it gave a certain sense of submission...like I couldn't bring myself to say it again..which I couldn't. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have more works but they're scattered throughout the forum. I think 2 or 3 more actual poems(Or what I considered poems), a couple of weekly activities, and the rest are all some of my rap lyrics that I posted. Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!