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Hey, I like them both. I think that they each reflect something of the experience. I imagine them on facing pages of the same book. The first is the experience as it is happening and the author is trying to capture it as it is, right then. The second is after some reflection. Together they may be greater than each separately.
Yeah, reading them again. Keep them both! Definitely. And, nice work there.
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