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I'm not sure where exactly the swearing doesn't work. But sometimes it just doesn't seem justified and it's as if it's there just for the sake of swearing. If that makes sense.
Maybe you could include the history during the actual game, with streets referencing the time he won all Remmy's money? Something along the lines of: Streets - You've got some balls, playing against me again. Remmy - Well, we'll see who makes who bankrupt this time. Just an idea.
And I think it's clear enough in the alleyway scene. I don't think that needs any expanding upon.
Anyway, I'm glad I was some help. You've got a great script.
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